What happened on a good or bad day.
One year ago, I went to a bar with my friends and got drunk too much. After that, I got to the Bus Terminal and waited for the bus. Suddenly, I had come up the idea to call my mum, pushed the number,talked with her for 10minits and missed the last bus. Unfortunately, I had to take a taxi instead, found the taxi,got on, arrived at home, unlocked the door, entered my room and realized that I had lost my card case. Oh, my....I tried to remember about the taxi,but couldn't get anything even it's colour. I hadn't lost any important things but it was so disappointing.
I think there is something wrong with"Suddenly, I had come up the idea to call my mum, pushed the number,talked with her for 10minits and missed the last bus." and "Oh, my....I tried to remember about the taxi,but couldn't get anything even it's colour. " and also i think you made some grammar mistakes.
ReplyDeleteYours sinserely,
Tianyu KANG
got drunk __drunk;got to ---went to;I had come up----had to come up with
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Oh poor you Rie!
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