Tuesday, 13 December 2011

What happend on a good or bad day? - Thinh

Yesterday was the worst day I have ever had in Perth. When I woke up, it was rainning heavily, but I still decided to go to school beacause it was the first day of the week, so I went to the train station without an umbrella. When I was in the train station, all my clothes were wet and I heard a new that a train was going to be late bacause of bad weather and I started thinking that it was my bad day. After that, I went to school late so I had to wait from 9.30 to 10.30 to join the class. When I finished the morning class, I got a headache so I wanted to go home to sleep. When I was in the train to go home, i was slept so i miss the stop to go to my house. Therefore, I had to wait about 15 minutes to take the train to go to my house. However, when I was at a stop to go to my house, it was still rained heavily so I had to wait until it stopped raining, and it took me 1 hour to wait. When it stopped raining, it was 3 p.m so

3 comments:

  1. Marlon: You and Law both seem to have public transport dramas. I am sorry you had bad experiences. :D ... but I enjoyed your stories :D

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  2. I think there is something wrong with your spelling such as "beacause" and also you need to change "a new" into "the news" beacuse "news" is uncountable!
    Yours sinserely,
    Tianyu KANG

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